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Dark Crow by ~SilverFoxglove:iconSilverFoxglove:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark


Dark Crow

On raven wings of night so black
Vengeful nails run down my back
Softly smiling, sultry Crow
Violet eyes with fiery glow

Dance inside the shadow's walls
Beloved victims hear his call
Pain will teach us how to love
Darkest angel from above

Lusting, sultry voice so moving
A raven's kiss is surely soothing
A secret smile, impending doom
Imprisoned in a willing tomb

Softly kissing pale white skin
A sight will fall for every sin
Screams of pain, a loving kiss
Lose yourself in arms of mist

He will lead if you will follow
Violet eyes will promise sorrow
Lay your head upon his chest
A loving smile, eternal rest...
©2003-2009 ~SilverFoxglove
:iconsilverfoxglove:

Author's Comments

Mmmm, yet another new poem kittens. Once again written in history class. Hope you enjoy. It means a great deal to me, and I would appreciate feedback. Please respect that I love this poem and don't steal it.

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:iconhellhathnofury:
~hellhathnofury Oct 9, 2003, 11:38:50 AM
gawd i love these types of poems. for some reason poems like this r my favourite
tres gut
megx
:icondoust19:
~Doust19 Oct 9, 2003, 11:40:45 AM
Sh- should I be aroused?

lol ;)

Awesome rhythm and the atmosphere you made is great. ^.^
:iconsilverfoxglove:
~SilverFoxglove Oct 9, 2003, 12:06:39 PM
*Snickers* Should you be? this poem is one of the best I've written I think. thank you fgor the comments, means a lot! ^_^
:iconsilverfoxglove:
~SilverFoxglove Oct 9, 2003, 12:08:29 PM
--_-- Stupid typo demon *stabs it and runs away* I meant to say thank you FOR the comment.
:iconfangirlthefox:
~fangirlthefox Jun 14, 2005, 1:41:39 PM
hmmm....curious.....

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:heart: Let me remain cheerful so that I may brighten your day. :heart:
~~~
You must LIVE to feel aLIVE.
~~~
My eyes are open wide. Have a look inside. My arms are open wide.
:iconsilverfoxglove:
~SilverFoxglove Jun 14, 2005, 7:09:11 PM
Curious? *arches brow* good curious or no?

--
It's a wonderful night for eyebrows.
It's a wonderful night for TEETH.
It's a wonderful night for GRINCH NIGHT!
Their Troubles will now commence!
Oh, I wouldn't stay home on a night like this
For SIXTY dollars and SIXTY cence.
:iconfangirlthefox:
~fangirlthefox Jun 15, 2005, 5:19:41 AM
^^ good curious. as you can tell, curiosity is part of my nature. I really like!

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:heart: Let me remain cheerful so that I may brighten your day. :heart:
~~~
You must LIVE to feel aLIVE.
~~~
My eyes are open wide. Have a look inside. My arms are open wide.
:iconsilverfoxglove:
~SilverFoxglove Jun 15, 2005, 8:38:27 AM
hehe, thank you ^_~ :hug:

--
It's a wonderful night for eyebrows.
It's a wonderful night for TEETH.
It's a wonderful night for GRINCH NIGHT!
Their Troubles will now commence!
Oh, I wouldn't stay home on a night like this
For SIXTY dollars and SIXTY cence.
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